Acre is a concept home of the future. It is a home with the function and
technology. This start up home company
is looking for people to invest in this home.
It has everything from solar power everything to an automatic lawn
mowing system. It is the future of the
American home, which are less cost efficient and more affordable then homes of
today about 70% less over 30 years. Now
onward to the strengths and weaknesses of the presentation and give tips on how
he could better his presentation.
Strengths:
Did well in the Q & A of his presentation. Did know the technical aspect of his company
and what they want to do. Just had a
vary difficult time presenting it.
Weaknesses:
There were several weaknesses that it really makes it hard
to find the presenters and presentation strengths. So clearly I am starting with weaknesses
first. When the presenter walked in he
was brief about himself I really don’t know if he was the CEO or just someone
on the team to pitch the idea. Second
the presentation was changed the day of or before the presentation. Which gives me the idea they are settle
changes. He brought pages of notes and
was reading either from them or the slides and I felt like he didn’t know his
topic at all. Which gets me thinking
that the changes to his presentation were big changes. Next the Words on the slide were nice and big
bold letters. But then one other word
was vertical smaller and white lying on the red letters. Not hard to see but hard to read. I almost didn’t think the white word were
part of the message. There were massive
amounts of information on pictorial slides.
A lot of distractions but the presenter was standing in the middle of
the screen so he was also the center at the presentation.
Tips on how to better this presentation. Practice, practice, practice, if he had been
on top of this pitch the change would have been fixed and altered long before
the pitch. He was supper nervous I don’t
count that against him as I get the same way.
Another thing he could do is bringing note cards instead of sheets of
paper. The lettering and words on his
presentation could have been a bit better and no vertical words hanging on
other words. His business concept is
actually great. It is the house of the
future. One thing I would improve on is
the technology part. He went over
concepts they want to do but as a consumer we also like to see concepts in action
or have pictures of the concepts so that we have an idea of what exactly is
supposed to happen with an automatic lawn mowing system. All pictures and drawing of what the house
will look like but not meat and potatoes on the concepts that’s what I would
want to see implemented into this pitch.
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